The Transition...
Is what holds this song back, just like you said in a previous comment. If the transition were fixed, this would be an excellent song.
The Transition...
Is what holds this song back, just like you said in a previous comment. If the transition were fixed, this would be an excellent song.
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I love the song idea, its pretty good.
In terms of a competition though, I would say you should work on the playing a bit more first. If its just a recording you are sending in, try to get better equipment and standardize the volume a bit.
If its a live competition, spend the time practicing consistency. It seemed to hop around a bit in terms of playing ability.
Fair enough
Thanks alot for taking the time to review :-)
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